Some people feel that young people spend too much time cut off from nature and that they should be encouraged to intact with natural life more. Others feel that this is a fact of modern Life and cannot be changed it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The topic that whether in major part of society should be inspired to lead a lifestyle having a close relationship with
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or not because of that their current one is quite far from it, is causing many discussions among
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. I believe that adolescents need to interact with natural life more
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others argue that it is the result of modernization and remains unchangeable. On the one hand, opponents of the idea about the encouragement of young
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to be
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friendly, feel that
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phenomenon is not worth to concern about and it is impossible to alter it.
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their thoughts, spending time cut off from
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, especially, among youths is a fact of modern life and it is not a crucial necessity to put interaction with
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a priority.
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, it is an irrefutable example that pursuing development without thinking about its adverse effects on the environment make Tashkent - the capital city of Uzbekistan - the dirtiest place to breathe in the world for the first time
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year.
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, the majority of
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believe that the establishment of a close relationship between the younger part of society and
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should be everyone's priority. Achieving
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result is a provision of a healthy environment and unpolluted
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because youths occupy the highest proportions of many countries' populations
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play the role of bridge between present and future generations. Making them aware is
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an easily achievable goal with the help of documentaries and broadcast on social media which they are spending most of their time on, demonstration of teachers at educational organizations like schools and universities,
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that, organizing various volunteering events with the participation of mainly young
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would be highly helpful towards
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aim. In conclusion, I am really against opponents of motivating young
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to lead a natural lifestyle and I am totally in the favor of supporters of
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idea in order to protect the world's
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from dilapidation and regain its magnificent originality.
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