The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.

The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.
The graph presents car ownership for every 1000
people
in five different Europe
countries
and compares it with the average of Europeans in three different years (2005, 2009, and 2015). It is clear from the chart that
people
who live in
Country
1 had fewer
cars
than the other four
countries
, and the residents of
Country
5 owned more
cars
than the other four
countries
and the European average.
People
in
country
4 owned the same number of
cars
in three survey years, seven persons had
cars
in every ten persons.
Country
2, 3 and 5 changed slightly, only
Country
1 had a remarkable disparity.
Besides
, in 2015 residents in
Countries
2 and 5 owned more
cars
than ten years ago, meanwhile, the number of
cars
decreased from 700 to 590 in
Country
3 in the survey period. In 2015, almost every resident in
Country
5 had
cars
, in comparison,
people
less than 40 per cent in
Country
1 owned
cars
per thousand. In the other three
countries
, at least 50 per cent of
people
had
cars
.
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  • Trend
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Average
  • Comparison
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Dip
  • Outperform
  • Lag behind
  • Demographic factors
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Mobility demand
  • Environmental concerns
  • Policy implications
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