Your local newspaper had an advertisement asking people to help with environmental projects in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. Describe a local environmental issue Explain how you can help Suggest how to avoid the problem in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in response to an advertisement campaign I saw on
a local newspaper. It mentioned a need for people's assistance to improve environmental projects in the area. Change preposition
in
This
ad caught my attention, as I was looking for some answer
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answers
with
a problem that has been happening Change preposition
to
over
our Change preposition
in
neighborhood
.
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neighbourhood
Firstly
, I would like to begin
by saying that, recently, while
I was taking a walk by
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in
neighborhood
, I overheard some people mentioning a serious Change the spelling
neighbourhood
water
leakage on
the local Change preposition
at
water
supply reservatory
. In short, I approached them to understand their complaints; it seems the leak is getting worse by the day and they fear Replace the word
reserve
to be
left without Change the verb form
being
water
within the next few days.
Secondly
, I belive
that I'm able to assist resolve Correct your spelling
believe
this
issue. As a matter of fact, I own a company especialized
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specialized
specialised
on
constructing containers to store liquids, Change preposition
in
such
as water
. Furthermore
, I guess I'm able to make a new water
container for our neighborhood's
needs. The thing is, to build them I use a much Change the spelling
neighbourhood's
durable
and light material, Correct quantifier usage
more durable
thus
it will last
a long time without showing problems again. However
, I need to get in contact with whoever is responsible to get on the specifics, would you be able to help me with that?
Yours faithfully,
Daniel.Submitted by Danarvelini
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coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter could benefit from clear transitions and a smoother flow of ideas.
coherence cohesion
Single ideas are well-contained within paragraphs, but consider enhancing connectivity among them.
task achievement
The issue has been described and a solution offered, but elaborating more on the significance of the issue could enhance the response.
task achievement
Appropriate tone for a formal letter; ensure all details for offering help are clear and specific actions are outlined.
