The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The flowchart depicts the essential steps in producing smoke

fish

. Those processes will be divided into two primary steps: producing smoke

fish

and delivering

to

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it to

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the

fishmarket

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fish market

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. The whole production

is

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apply

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started with the manufacturing of smoked

fish

.

Initially

, fresh

fish

are unloaded from

net

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a net

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in the sea which is

being

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apply

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put in the boat. After

processed

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processing

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further

in the port, the

fish

get to be

freezed

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frozen

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in

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for

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a long time to prevent expiry date. Afterwards, the

fish

will

be thaw

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be thawed

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in

a

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apply

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fresh water and cut with a knife.

Further

, it needs to be

sinked

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linked

in

a

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apply

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salt water

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saltwater

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and should be

colored

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coloured

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using yellow as a food

additives

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additive

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to attract consumers. After

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being colored

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colored

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colouring

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, the

fish

need to be smoked. At the subsequent stage, the

fish

is packaged and

freezed

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frozen

at 0 degrees. After

freezed

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freezing

freeze

, the

fish

is kept in the cold store to reduce the expiry date. The

fish

get to be distributed by truck. Eventually, the

fish

is ready to be sold.