Making smoking illegal is the best way to protect people from the harmful effects of tobacco. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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Some people argue that the best way to protect them from the harmful effects of tobacco is by making smoking illegal. In my point of view, it will attract a wave of protest from
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because they argue that smoking is not the main problem that causes diseases in the human body. Some
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will protest when a smoking activity becomes illegal. In
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case, it happens because society in
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present day becomes more addicted and thinks they are not getting any diseases by smoking and are not harmful to others. Not only from
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, but protests may
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come from cigarette companies because it will give a more negative impact on the economy field.
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, by making smoking an illegal activity, it will close manufacturing, increase unemployment, and indirectly can reduce the income of a country provided by cigarette manufacturers. As we know that country
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as Indonesia has more income from that business and if the law is implemented it can make the Indonesian economy collapse. If the government want to reduce the negative effects, it is better that the authority increase the tax on a cigarette. by implementing
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law, only a particular population will buy that product and
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slowly change their way of life because they will think twice if they want to be active
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. In
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case, it will reduce access for youngsters to become active
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because most of them do not have jobs and enough money.
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, Singapura is one of some countries that success to reduce the number of
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by adding more taxes on tobacco-based products.
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, many Singaporean are healthier and live longer than people who live in other countries that have unstrict rules about smoking. In conclusion, Making smoking illegal is not the only way that the government have to do because it will affect other fields
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as the economy. If the aim is to reduce the risk given by smoking, the government should try to reduce the number of smoking by increasing the tax on that product.
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