The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
This
chart provides data on the number of sold mobile phone brands in 2009, 2011, and 2013.
The Y-axis shows units sold in millions and the X-axis shows five different brands, Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG, and ZTE.
To begin
with, an overall
analysis of this
data illustrates important observations, which are, throughout the three years, Samsung and Nokia sold the most mobile phones. The first started with units sold over 200 and grew to reach over 400 in 2013. Whereas
, the latter begin at over 400 and declined just above 200 in 2013. Both Apple and LG did not do well in these years with a maximum of 100 being sold by both of them. However
, Apple showed development throughout the years. Lastly
, ZTE had poor growth, where they never hit 100 sold units. An evaluation of this
data highlights the strength of Samsung. Moreover
, gives predictions about the year in which Nokia began to fall as a company.Submitted by m-not21 on
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