The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram describes the whole process of creating
sugar
from sugar
cane
. Overall
, we can see that there are seven stages of production, starting from growing the sugar
cane
to the final product.
To begin
with, sugar
cane
takes about one
to one
and a half years to grow. When they are fully grown, there are two ways in which sugar
cane
is harvested. The first one
involves a specifically designed machine that collects these canes, and the second one
is done by hand - each sugar
cane
is cut with a blade slightly above the ground. After that, sugar
cane
is crushed and transformed into juice.
The juice is, then
, purified using a limestone filter. By applying heat to the filtered juice within an evaporator, the liquid is removed and transformed into syrup. This
syrup is then
put into a centrifuge, which can separate the sugar
crystals from the syrup itself. Finally
, the sugar
is dried and cooled in a special container.Submitted by praewsu2513 on
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