The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Overall
, we can see that there are seven stages of production, starting from growing the Linking Words
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cane
to the final product.
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involves a specifically designed machine that collects these canes, and the second Use synonyms
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cane
is cut with a blade slightly above the ground. After that, Use synonyms
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cane
is crushed and transformed into juice.
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, purified using a limestone filter. By applying heat to the filtered juice within an evaporator, the liquid is removed and transformed into syrup. Linking Words
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Finally
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