It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that taking prospects is essential for everyone in their professional lives and individual lives. I am supposed that

this

idea would bring more benefits than drawbacks. On the one hand, there is no denying that doing something attached

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risks

will lead people to face a lot of losses in the future. A particular example here is when someone expects to be rich in

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fast way by stock surfing.

This

way might help some of them have much money in the short term, but in almost of cases have to lose money and even nothing remains. And the reasons for these failures are

due to

lack of knowledge or information.

On the other hand

, I believe that taking

risks

would help you reach your goals. Because no action is done, no result is returned. If you are always afraid of hazards, you never achieve what you want.

For example

, if a new great job offer comes to you, but because

this

opportunity will be more challenging for you,

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you do not take it.

It is clear that

you lose the chance to level up in your career path.

Moreover

, regularly the high

risks

are side by side with the high successes

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because most of the risky chances are not the choices of many people, and

this

leads to those paying more price for those who take them.

For instance

, nowadays, there are some factors which are dangerous. It makes students worried to enroll . But once they graduate with these factors, they would get jobs with great compensation. In conclusion, in individuals' lives, they should take

risks

because it's a vital thing. I am in

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of the advantages of

this

opinion by the disadvantages.