Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to you regarding the letter I received from your company about increasing of insurance premium of my car. I have been your customer for the
eight years, and I never claimed any accident during
period. am fond of travelling on public transport to my work,
,I have been using my car
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, a 20% increment in my car premium is a massive hike for me. I can be understanding your strategies for a price hike after several years.
,as a loyal customer, Please consider locking my current price for at least one year. Otherways I am afraid to move for cheaper options. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Amina.
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