The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two chart graphs illustrate the percentage of how many households
owned
electrical appliances for chores and how many Correct pronoun usage
that owned
hours
they spent on housework per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it is clear that
electrical appliances became common in the given timeframe, therefore
total hours
spent on doing housekeeping work significantly dropped. Also
, the percentage of households equipped with refrigerators increased rapidly
than washing machine and vacuum cleaner owners.
Correct quantifier usage
more rapidly
As for the
first graph which shows the percentage of families with domestic electrical appliances refrigerator owners drastically went up, almost 3% in 1920 but 90% in 1960. Houses with refrigerators took up 100% in 1980, and Change preposition
The
finally
all Add a comma
,finally
family
had it. Fix the agreement mistake
families
Next,
vacuum cleaner buyers,
began at 30% in 1920, but slowly rose to 100% in 2000. Remove the comma
apply
Lastly
, families who had washing machine
inflated until 1960 by 30%Fix the agreement mistake
machines
,
but slightly fall in 1980 to 65%. But the number of washing machine owners started buying more in Remove the comma
apply
80s
, so more than 60% of people ended up having it in 2019.
In terms of the number of the second graph, the total number of Change the article
the 80s
hours
of housework per week, per household began with
50 Change preposition
at
hours
in 1920 but ended with approximately 18 hours
in 1970. From 1970 to 2019, the total length of time for chores remained constant, around 15 hours
. In 2019, the figure reached at
Remove the preposition
apply
the
lowest, which was nearly 12 Correct article usage
apply
hours
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