The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart depicts information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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adults
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people
37.0
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adult
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adults
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at 57.3
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adults
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of 61.6
people
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and young
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adults
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