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Many people believe that it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to protect it themselves. Why do you think it is the case? What actions do you think that individuals can do to protect the environment?

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The environment is defined as the surroundings in which
people
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 live. Nowadays, there is a nationwide concept of protecting the environment but no
one
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 made any effort towards it. In
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 essay, I will shed light on all the reasons behind
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 case and how it can be combated. On the
one
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 hand, these days every individual knows the current situation of their surroundings
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 as how badly we are damaging our planet earth, the
trees
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 being cut down to meet the increasing human demand, global warming, and air and water pollution.
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, In Pakistan,
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 account for only 4-5% of the land.
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,
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 the forest department,
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 should cover 25-30% of a country to protect our planet from damage and for sustainable life.
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, everyone is busy with their own life and making money.
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, no
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 finds time to come forward and take steps to overcome
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 problem. In my opinion, it can't only be done at an individual level. Both government and the
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 should work together to protect the environment for future generations. Government should implement strict laws and start campaigns to educate
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.
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, at an individual level,
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 should take steps by themselves
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 as don't throw trash on roads, parks, and tourist areas and trying to be responsible citizens.
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, In Pakistan, during Imran Khan's tenure, the campaign of planting
trees
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 was started which was a good step. In conclusion, I completely agree with the statement that individual believes on protecting their surroundings is important but no
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 finds time in their busy lives to do for their country.
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, the government and their citizens could work together on
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 issue.
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