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The plan below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The deal depicts the current intention of the Southwest installation and how it will look after the reconstruction of the airstrip in the imminent.
Overall
, there are many changes in the reconstruction project for the forthcoming. The main turnarounds are the construction of new doorways for aeroplanes.
To begin
 with, in the present and the forthcoming ,plan there are some places which are going to be replaced like security, passport control and customs. In future, the airfield will have two exits each for departures and arrivals
instead
 of one each now. As the check-in has been reshuffled from the left side to the right side and replaced by bag drop and the cafeteria. The number of doorways will
also
 rise from eight doors to eighteen ports adding ten more fences in the redevelopment of the airstrip.
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 passengers need to travel by walkway from one gate to another but after ,reconstruction they will be travelling by a sky train which will be built in the new runway. After redevelopment airfield authorities will
also
 add ATMs for passengers where they can remove money from their accounts
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. There will
also
 be a car hire spot constructed where people can hire a taxi after arriving at the airport.
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