Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt that mobile phones

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played a crucial role in human lifestyles recently, and needless to say that today's children have been being affected by

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phenomenon because of long

hours

on the screen.

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essay will

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elaborate on the adverse effects of

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cause, and I will give reasons to support them.

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with, there are some possible factors

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from

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outcome. Because a globalised society has had a great

influnce

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influence

on juveniles over the

last

decades,

cellphones

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are considered

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affordable

and ubiquitous to children worldwide. To put it simply, they are allowed to use

such

devices to socialise or communicate with others, especially their buddies and parents. Things go wrong, some of them spend too many

hours

a day on the screen with a variety of activities,

such

as online games, social platforms and chatting, which is not the right thing. Thai teenagers,

for example

, squander over 5

hours

a day on online chatting apps, which is considered a time-consuming thing.

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the

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result of

this

, a number of juveniles may unavoidably experience certain problems

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using

smartphones

. If they spend too much time on

such

activity, it will adversely contribute to their personal lives,

such

as their bad grades or lower performance at

schools

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due to

staying up late. In some cases, they become completely distracted by using

smartphones

for long

hours

, which gives rise

in

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lower concentration levels. Another effect of

this

,

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possible health issues may occur, including

eyes

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strain, diabetes, and obesity, so

this

should be taken into consideration. In conclusion, using

smartphones

for excessive

hours

might put a great strain on most adolescents'

lifestyle

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. The results of

this

are from their activities and cheaper

smartphones

, so

this

can possibly cause

terible

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terrible

health problems and poor grades.