thr table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of britian. the table shows where the money vame from and the chart shows how it was distributed

thr table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of britian. the table shows where the money vame from and the chart shows how it was distributed
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The table gives information about three types of police budget sources; the National Government, local Taxes and other sources (eg grants) in millions of pounds
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, the pie charts show us how they spend
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money on three different categories Salaries ( officers and staff), Technology and Buildings and transport between two years 2017-18. It is important to note that in the table the major part of their income came from National Government and pies salaries are three-quarters of the cost. In 2017 the national government was 175.5m and in the following year experienced a slight growth to 177.8m
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local which was 91.2m in the previous year increased to 102.3m and in the end, other sources did not change a lot and remained at 38m to 285m.
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, Officers and staff Salaries which stood at 75% in 2017 faced a gradual decrease to 69% in 2018.
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buildings and transport stayed in the same ratio of 17% in both years, but Technology proportion was higher in 2018 rising by 7%.
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