Many people/students today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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or students Use synonyms
believes
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believe
if
they live or Correct word choice
apply
work
in another Use synonyms
country
it can make they can grow up more and get more Use synonyms
experiences
after graduating from university in Fix the agreement mistake
experience
Use synonyms
home
Correct pronoun usage
their home
country
. Because there are a lot of things to learn if we stay in Use synonyms
another
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another place
other places
places
. There are many Use synonyms
advantages
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work
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country
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be
more outweigh the Unnecessary verb
apply
disadvantages
.
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advantages
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for
staying in other Change preposition
of
places
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beside
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besides
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home
Correct article usage
the home
country
after graduating from university Use synonyms
is
more than the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
disadvantages
, Use synonyms
people
or students mostly Use synonyms
looking
for something bigger for their life when they finished college. Wrong verb form
look
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Fresh
graduated
can get a job in their Change the form of the verb
graduate
home
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country
, but some Use synonyms
people
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thinks
if they just stay in their Change the verb form
think
home
, Use synonyms
people
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of
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apply
experiences
or more money for their life. Fix the agreement mistake
experience
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people
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working
in Wrong verb form
work
a
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apply
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home
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the home
country
, they Use synonyms
just
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are just
with
the same place with the same job and maybe they can even grow up. So many Change preposition
in
people
or students decided to go to another Use synonyms
country
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for
live or Change preposition
to
work
because there are many Use synonyms
advantages
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besides
disadvantages
.
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the
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apply
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, so Use synonyms
there’s
the Change the verb form
there are
disadvantages
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work
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country
, but the negative things about Use synonyms
lived
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living
places
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not
that much than the Add a missing verb
are not
advantages
. Use synonyms
The fresh
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Fresh
graduated
must Replace the word
graduates
be
want to Unnecessary verb
apply
spent
their time with family or friends in Change the verb
spend
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home
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the home
country
. Use synonyms
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people
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with
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from
people
decided to live or Use synonyms
work
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places
, they have to be ready to be far away Use synonyms
with
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from
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home
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their home
country
. And the other Use synonyms
Use synonyms
disadvantages
is we have to learn something new Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantage
with
the Change preposition
about
country
that we want to live in.
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work
in Use synonyms
other
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another country
other countries
country
when Use synonyms
graduated
in Wrong verb form
graduating
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home
Correct pronoun usage
their home
country
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people
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experiences
or maybe get a better job with more money. But they have to be ready when they decided to go to Fix the agreement mistake
experience
another
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another place
other places
places
. Use synonyms
People
have to learn something new, and they have to be far away Use synonyms
with
their family or friends in their Change preposition
from
Use synonyms
home
.Fix the agreement mistake
homes
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