Mrs Barrett, an English speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for somene to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. in your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barret,
I am writing to you because I have seen your advertisement in our local magazine.
I am Arkadiy a not English speaking man who would love to help you whatever you want.
I must say that I am a golden arm boy and making a lot of house stuff for me as easy as pie.
For example
, I am able to use a hammer, swap the dust, garden
and Correct word choice
and garden
moreover
, I can play the piano for you that
can make you relax and clean your thoughts of all the bad stuff in our rude world.
Of Correct pronoun usage
apply
course
you would wonder why I prefer helping you. There is one reason. As I said before I am not a native English speaker but I have recently moved to Add a comma
course,
this
country and I struggled with learning English. So I would appreciate you
if you speak with me Correct pronoun usage
it
while
I do
work for you.
In conclusion, I am supposed to say that I have quite a little free time, making money in a new country takes a lot of time, but I am always free on Saturday and on Sunday.
Kind regardless,
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Structure
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Grammar
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Language Use
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Content
Your personalized approach in expressing your willingness to help and your reasons for doing so adds a nice touch to your letter.
Tone
The friendly and respectful tone throughout the letter is suitable for writing to someone you haven't met.
Task Achievement
You did well in addressing all parts of the prompt, succinctly covering your capabilities, your motivation, and your availability.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,