In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of
both
spouses
to earn a living for the family. In my opinion, responsibility is the most important obligation in every marriage, and both
spouses
should strive to make money
in every marriage, but it depends on their circumstances.
On the one hand, people with a cooperative mindset can live better with other people. When every spouse works and tries to make money
to make a better life
with her husband or his wife, they can understand that time is vital and making money
is difficult. For example
, in shopping, women normally buy more than men, and if women know about how they can make money
they are more appreciative of the money
, and they save more money
and buy less. In addition
, both
of them can perceive better about spending time together and trying for a good life
.
On the other hand
, we have some spouses
who want to earn a living for the family, but considering the situation, they cannot work
together. It depends on their conditions, some conditions may exist that one cannot go to work
to earn money
. For example
, some people want to continue their education after marriage, so they cannot go to work
, and they should study and go to college for education. Another example is for any spouse who has a disability or may not have any functional skills, so one of them should go to work
, and have more struggle (struggle more) to earn more money
.
In conclusion, striving for a calm life
and understanding how to make more money
, and appreciating life
is vital for both
spouses
. I agree with this
idea, but it depends on every spouse for better life
circumstances.Submitted by Ravin_kh on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite