Some people believe that government should spend money to provide faster public transport. Others think that there are other important priorities for public transport such as cost and environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are different opinions about where the
government
should spend their money
on
. Whether to spend Change preposition
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money
to provide faster public transport
or to another important things
like Replace the adjective
another important thing
other important things
environment
. In my opinion, I think that the Add an article
the environment
government
should spend money
to have a faster public transport
method to prevent traffic
.
Firstly
, if the government
decided to spend money
on new public transport
for a
faster transportation Remove the article
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then
this
is a good decision because there will be less traffic
, faster and it may be less costly for some people
. In addition
, this
new invention has a positive side in
the Change preposition
on
environment
. For example
, there will be less crowded placesAdd the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
the environment
will be cleaner, and people
will refuge to these new public transports
because they are a lot faster away from Fix the agreement mistake
transport
traffic
and not highly costed for some levels of people
.
Secondly
, some people
think that there are other important priorities for public transport
like cost and environment
. New public transport
may be costly and not friendly built for the environment
. Such
as: if the newly built transport
method was trains
, Change the verb form
trained
then
it will cost a lot and require so much fuel which is not good for the environment
. So that's why others dislike the idea of faster public transport
.
In conclusion, there is a wide variety of people
with a
different Correct article usage
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opinion
about Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
the
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government
decisions, also
others have
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the
benefit Correct article usage
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of
these decisions. Because there will be a new faster Change preposition
from
transport
method away from street traffic
and crowded places.Submitted by dialamustafaalwais on
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