Some people believe that government should spend money to provide faster public transport. Others think that there are other important priorities for public transport such as cost and environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different opinions about where the
government
should spend their
money
on
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. Whether to spend
money
to provide faster public
transport
or to
another important things
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another important thing
other important things
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like
environment
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the environment
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. In my opinion, I think that the
government
should spend
money
to have a faster public
transport
method to prevent
traffic
.
Firstly
, if the
government
decided to spend
money
on new public
transport
for
a
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faster transportation
then
this
is a good decision because there will be less
traffic
, faster and it may be less costly for some
people
.
In addition
,
this
new invention has a positive side
in
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the
environment
.
For example
, there will be less crowded places
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therefore
the
environment
will be cleaner, and
people
will refuge to these new public
transports
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transport
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because they are a lot faster away from
traffic
and not highly costed for some levels of
people
.
Secondly
, some
people
think that there are other important priorities for public
transport
like cost and
environment
. New public
transport
may be costly and not friendly built for the
environment
.
Such
as: if the newly built
transport
method
was trains
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,
then
it will cost a lot and require so much fuel which is not good for the
environment
. So that's why others dislike the idea of faster public
transport
. In conclusion, there is a wide variety of
people
with
a
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different
opinion
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opinions
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about
the
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government
decisions,
also
others
have
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the
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benefit
of
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these decisions. Because there will be a new faster
transport
method away from street
traffic
and crowded places.
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