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You recently went on a business trip and stayed an a hotel.On getting home,you realize you left some things at the hotel.Write a letter to the hotel manager. Details of your stay The items you left behind What you want the manager to do

Dear Sir, I hope
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 letter finds you well. I am writing
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 letter to enquire about my
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 , which I left recently in your hotel during my business trip. I am Sam, the manager of the Singh Retailers company. I arrived at your "The Pacific Hotel" on 11th November 2025 to attend a business meeting with the board of directors of our company. I stayed for a week, from 11th November to 18th November 2025. The things I left at your hotel are my business laptop and a phone charger. I was in a hurry to board a flight, and I accidentally left these
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 on the side table of the room. These
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 are really important to me. I kindly request you to locate these
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 on a priority basis. In the laptop, I saved all the important documents
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 and the list of investors.
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 , without a charger, I am unable to charge my phone.
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 , I request
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inform me once you find these
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Sam.

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Task response
For task response, say all items, the date, and what you want the hotel to do. Make it clear.
Task response
For task response, be precise with the ask and the items.
Coherence and cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, split text into two parts: intro and request. Use one idea per paragraph.
tone
Polite and formal tone.
content
Dates and items are given.
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Request to locate items is clear.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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