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The qualities a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#qualities #person #university #institution
It is argued that there are no
universities
 or similar academic
institutions
 in which people can learn a quality to become successful. I totally disagree with
this
 statement, people can adapt or develop
this
 quality in
institutions
 as well. First of all, there are many academies
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 and
universities
 where people are taught how to develop their personalities in order to achieve their goals and become successful in life. If ones have a lack of confidence, arachnophobia or stage fear, or a person
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wants to be more fluent in
English
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 language, all can be learned at schools, and
universities
. There are many
universities
 that conduct debates, and jam sessions, in order to overcome the fear of the students so that they can become more fluent in it, which will be beneficial for them in future.
For instance
, there are many successful singers,dancers and
as well as
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a businessman
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businessman
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 who talk about their careers
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which they shared achievements they got in their
universities
 by which they got motivated and started their careers in that streams and became successful.
Secondly
, in the olden days educational
institutions
 don't conduct
such
 activities by which students get the chance to showcase their skills or learn new things by participating in them. But nowadays there are many
universities
 which conduct several activities
such
 as sports competitions, cultural events, learning tech skills, travel, etc they
also
 provide internships for students in which they can participate and learn new techniques and improve their skills in activities in which they want to start their career.
To conclude
, I strongly believe that ideas of becoming successful can be learned in academies and
institutions
 as well because our interest in a particular stream or activity will develop in our academic career only.
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