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In the past, the role of a teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to a lot of information. There is, therefore, no role for teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the excessive improvement in our educational methods is considered an indispensable factor for our children;
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, the
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 of a teacher became different and more critical than before, but some people argue that there is no
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 for them in the modern education system, but is that correct statement?
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 phenomenon, taking into consideration I totally disagree with
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 opinion.
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, it goes without saying that, any school depends mainly on its teachers, actually, it is not the school only but the educational system, as they are the fuel of it. In a matter of fact, there are different roles for tutors like guidance and redirection. To illustrate, let us imagine a student who decided to proceed with self-learning without external guidance from a tutor, most probably he will lose his way, because of a lack of guidance and an inability to find the correct information.
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, the first mentors for the children are their teachers, they are playing a vital
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 in shaping their minds and their way of thinking,
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 to how to understand life differently and solve several problems they might face,
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 help them with how to take decisions affecting their lives.
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, If we ask anyone from famous and successful people who really affected our history about who was the first
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 model for him, most likely the answer will include one of their tutors.
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 the aforementioned reasons, we may safely conclude that the
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 of the teachers in the modern education system is vital and critical, at the same time we should work harder on enhancing it to ensure a prosperous and great future for society and the next generations.
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