Nowadays people are moving to urban areas from rural areas what are the reason and what problem can cause

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Now a days
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rural
people
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are moving to urban
areas
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because of modern facilities and to have career
opportunities
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but
due to
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this
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these
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urban
areas
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people
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facing
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a
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problems
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problems
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. In
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technological
era
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there are many internet sources like mobile phones, personal computers, laptops etc from which mobile phones
are commonly use
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by everyone even in rural
areas
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.
People
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from rural
areas
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are taking advantage of these sources and getting to know about everything which can be useful for them.
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instance
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litracy
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literacy
rate of
olden
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the olden
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days in rural
areas
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has been increasing day by day.
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are getting educated and doing respected jobs in MNCs,hospitals,
schools
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and schools
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of
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in
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urban
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the urban
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area
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areas
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to have a better life. In order to save the travelling
expences
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expenses
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people
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are shifting to
metropolitian
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metropolitan
cities and
also
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for facilities which they cannot find in rural
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.
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, population growth
have
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been increasing rapidly and
this
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outcoming many
problems
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like job
opportunities
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,
accomodations
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accommodations
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etc. As we all know, India is a developing country and there are some
areas
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which
is
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in still under
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the developing
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developing
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stage and in
additional
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to
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if
population
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the population
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goes on increasing there will
no
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good
opportunities
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will
left
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for
new
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a new
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generation.
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Moreover
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many
people
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are already shifting abroad in order to grab
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in other countries because there
is
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are
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no more great
opportunities
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left in their own country.
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, govt should develop the rural
areas
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by setting up all facilities for
people
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such
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as building hospitals, companies etc to overcome
such
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problems
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.
To sum up
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with
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, if
people
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get new
opportunities
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in rural
areas
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then
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we can encounter
the
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apply
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problems
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with
this
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solution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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