The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The line graph illustrated the total

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of queries by phone, email, and

in person

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received in a Tourist Information office located in one city during the first half of the year 2011.

Overall

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, it is evident that

whereas

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the

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of enquiries in two ways in person and by phone had sharply

incrased

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increased

, there was a gradual decrease in the

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of enquiries received

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through

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emails over the period. Looking at the total of

face to face

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inquiries, which was by far the most dominant than the other, it witnessed a

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papad

rise that started from just above 400 in January, after which it peaked

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at just less

2000

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than 2000

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in

Jan

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.

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calls experienced a slight fluctuation at the beginning from

Jan

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to Mar between 900 and 1000 calls, it increased dramatically to reach 1600 calls in Jun.

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, the

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of enquiries received

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through

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emails, which was the least

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the end of the period, began at just under 800 in

Jan

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, before falling to under 400 in May and

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levelling

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till the end of

Jan

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.