The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph illustrated the total
number
of queries by phone, email, and in person
received in a Tourist Information office located in one city during the first half of the year 2011.
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in-person
Overall
, it is evident that whereas
the number
of enquiries in two ways in person and by phone had sharply incrased
, there was a gradual decrease in the Correct your spelling
increased
number
of enquiries received though
emails over the period.
Looking at the total of Correct your spelling
through
face to face
inquiries, which was by far the most dominant than the other, it witnessed a Add a hyphen
face-to-face
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rise that started from just above 400 in January, after which it peaked Correct your spelling
papad
up
at just less Change preposition
apply
2000
in Change preposition
than 2000
Jan
. while
calls experienced a slight fluctuation at the beginning from Jan
to Mar between 900 and 1000 calls, it increased dramatically to reach 1600 calls in Jun.
In contrast
, the number
of enquiries received though
emails, which was the least Correct your spelling
through
in
the end of the period, began at just under 800 in Change the preposition
at
Jan
, before falling to under 400 in May and then
levelling of
till the end of Change preposition
off
Jan
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