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People in the modern world have a greater number of health problems compared to people in the past due to the fact that they have an unhealthy eating habit. Do you agree with the statement?

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Nowadays, there is an increasing number of individuals who are unhealthy
due to
 their bad habits with
food
. I totally agree with the statement because, compared to the past,
people
 are more influenced by social media and television when it comes to eating. One of the main reasons that lead to a decline in
people
's health is overweight. When someone starts to gain extra pounds, there can be serious consequences to their body, but
also
 their mind.
For example
, the majority of
people
 suffer from obesity, heart disease and diabetes caused by eating too much but
also
 from a lack of exercise.
In addition
, weight
people
 make excuses in order to avoid doing physical activities like they just want to rest or sleep.
As a consequence
, they will not know how bad it is until it's too late.
On the other hand
, we can mention that today
people
 rely more on fast
food
 and packaged
food
instead
 of choosing a healthy way of eating.
This
 problem is more common among the youth as they don't want to cook their
food
 but prefer to order it online.
For instance
, college students often order their
food
 by using online systems like 'Delivero' or 'Just it' which offer junk
food
 for the most part.
In contrast
,
people
 should prepare more healthy
food
 that provides them with enough calories and proteins so they will not have weight problems. In conclusion,
people
 should understand that being healthy is necessary to prevent many complications which could lead to death. A good way to achieve
this
 goal is to be more active by doing regular exercise and
also
have
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 a balanced diet.
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