It is believed that banning junk food is the best way to reduce the problem of obesity among individuals. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued by many individuals that

forbiding

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forbidding

street

food

is the optimal method to decrease the issue of

heavy weight

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between

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among

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the citizens. I partially agree with

this

given statement and

this

essay shall shed light upon my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs

along with

a reasoned conclusion. Foremost, the prominent cause behind my disagreement is that there are more other factors which give fitness to the population

such

as daily

excercises

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exercises

exercise

,

take

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part in

an

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apply

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outdoor activities,

do

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their own work by themself and many more. When

people

focus on that types of things, they would protect

from

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themselves from

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health

aiments

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ailments

aliments

.

For example

, a

suvey

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survey

conducted by Harward University revealed that 65% of the commoners do not take junk

food

and

perfome

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perform

perfume

countless tasks

in

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on

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the ground or

parks

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in parks

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with the assistance of

this

they have survived

from

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apply

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obesity.

Hence

, there are

beneficial

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for

people

's upcoming life. Paradoxically, the fundamental ground behind my agreement is that in

this

contemporary era, parents have

hectic

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schedule

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, so

that is

why they order

ready made

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food

which is

cook

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cooked

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within

few

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a few

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minutes and it puts adverse impact on human

beings

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beings'

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stomach as it is more oily and

provide

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provides

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bad fat in their bodies.

Consequently

, humans may face

hurdle

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the hurdle

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of fatness.

For instance

, it is published an article by The Tribune newspaper showed that approximately 45% of the crowd

prefer

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prefers

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to eat street

food

because it is delicious as compared to

home made

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homemade

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food

. If

people

less use

of

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apply

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it, they could reduce that disease among the masses.

To conclude

,

although

people

will have good

doet

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diet

in their daily routine with

this

they can secure from heaviness, but there

are

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is

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numerous process to solve

this

problem.