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These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?

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Television is one of the most familiar's entertainment devices for everyone.
However
, there is growing sentiment today that there are a lot of violent
actions
 on television shows and films. From my point of view, I strongly believe that violence has a negative effect on
children
. First of all,
Children
 tend to learn from something, some
actions
 as they see. They copy what they see every day and do that in the same situation.
For example
,
children
 usually watch a film with
content
 about school bullying and they see that other students feel scared and obey
children
 who bully and beat them. From that point, if they want to be a boss with power, they need to fight and bully each other. If their parents do not know about
children
's mindsets and do not teach them about the consequences of that
actions
,
children
 are easily affected by negative
actions
.
Secondly
, Violent
content
 has a negative effect on
children
's mental and emotional health.
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children
 become sacred after eating horror movies or films with lots of fights, they feel like something is coming to attack them.
This
 in many ways can not be good for them emotionally. To sum it up, I think it is better to raise well-rounded
children
 and confident
children
 than
children
 engulfed in fear because of terrifying
content
 on television In conclusion, violent
actions
 bring many disadvantages for the growing-up of each child. To preserve
children
 from some negative
actions
 and keep their minds clear and healthy, parents and teachers should take care
more
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of their
children
, limiting
this
 kind of
content
 and
also
 teaching them how to avoid violence.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitizes
  • imitate
  • aggressive behaviors
  • fear and anxiety
  • overall mental health
  • social skills
  • increased aggression
  • healthy relationships
  • academic performance
  • increased stress
  • distraction
  • negative influence
  • exposure to violence
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