Nowadays , air pollution is becoming a global problem over the world. Suggest some appropriate solutions with relevant examples.

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the
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air pollution
,
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last
two decades by population. That situation is the biggest problem and nowadays that
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by many researchers. These days,
air
pollution
is
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issue over the world. There
a
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number of problems arising from
this
tendency
however
, solutions are available to tackle them. One major solution
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industry
work rate
,
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because
last
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twenty years
industry
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is
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importantly
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growth ,
that
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develpoment
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development
impact
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the
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air
pollution
and many problems.
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the
industry
the
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best way to
the
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progressing
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,
but
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that is
damaged
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to
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the environment. Fortunately , there are solutions, and
that
is
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explanation
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can
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decrease
the
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air
pollution
.
For example
, now factories are using fuel
such
as petrol, gas and coal but if they do use another source
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namely, solar
energy
, wind
energy
, tidal wave
energy
and nuclear power that tendency help to
a
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enormous fall the
air
pollution
. Turning to
the
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another solution
is
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the
goverment
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government
control all factories and
industry
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areas and apply
punisment
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punishment
such
as money and
restrict
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law
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the law
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.
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some fields are doing
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of law ,so the state is creating some advantages for
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industry
field.
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instance
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the
countries
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executive department gives
to
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money support because another source of
energy
creationing
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creation
creating
is expensive but can be done. In conclusion, I would maintain that
air
pollution
tremendously down rate in
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a decade,
thus
that is
depending on humans. The environment is fragile,
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we must
be protect
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world
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and transmit next generation.
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