Nowadays , air pollution is becoming a global problem over the world. Suggest some appropriate solutions with relevant examples.
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significantly
concern Change the adverb
significant
to
the Change preposition
about
airpollution
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air pollution
,
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in, last
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the
last
two decades by population. That situation is the biggest problem and nowadays that investigate
by many researchers. These days, Wrong verb form
investigated
air
pollution
is phenomenon
issue over the world. ThereCorrect article usage
a phenomenon
a
number of problems arising from Add a missing verb
are a
this
tendency however
, solutions are available to tackle them.
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is diminished
is diminishing
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the
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industry's
industry
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apply
last
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the last
industry
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are
importantly
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important
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for
that
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and that
develpoment
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development
impact
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impacted
the
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apply
air
pollution
and many problems. Although
the industry
the
best way to Add a missing verb
is the
the
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apply
progressing
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progress
but
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apply
that is
damaged
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damaging
to
the environment. Fortunately , there are solutions, and Change preposition
apply
that
is
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apply
explanation
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an explanation
can
decrease Correct pronoun usage
that can
the
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apply
air
pollution
. For example
, now factories are using fuel such
as petrol, gas and coal but if they do use another source energy
namely, solar Change preposition
of energy
energy
, wind energy
, tidal wave energy
and nuclear power that tendency help to a
enormous fall the Change the article
an
air
pollution
.
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another solution Remove the article
apply
is
the Unnecessary verb
apply
goverment
control all factories and Correct your spelling
government
industry
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industrial
punisment
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punishment
such
as money and restrict
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restricts
law
. Add an article
the law
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violation
of law ,so the state is creating some advantages for Add an article
a violation
whole
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the whole
industry
field. For
instance
the Add a comma
,instance
countries
executive department gives Change noun form
country's
to
money support because another source of Change preposition
apply
energy
creationing
is expensive but can be done.
In conclusion, I would maintain that Correct your spelling
creation
creating
air
pollution
tremendously down rate in next
a decade, Correct article usage
the next
thus
that is
depending on humans. The environment is fragile, moreover
we must Add a comma
,moreover
be protect
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protect
world
and transmit next generation.Add an article
the world
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