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Writing Samples
Band 6

A neighbour has damaged your car while parking his/her vehicle in the lane in front of your house. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: * explain why you are writing * describe the damage to your car and express your feelings about it * recommend what steps he/she should take to resolve the situation.

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Dear Madam/Sir My name is Injun Lee; I am currently dwelling
in
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 38 Lowerson street, Lutwyche. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that it seems like my
car
 was damaged
last
 night,
while
 you were parking your vehicle in front of my house. When I inspected my vehicle to access
to
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my workplace
this
 morning, the front and rear bumper of the
car
 were severely scratched and crushed.
In addition
, it was able to recognise in distance, and I could not drive my
car
 to commute from my house because of potential risks. I was quite frustrated and embarrassed as soon as I saw my
car
 was damaged.
Furthermore
, as a friendly neighbour, it was disappointing that you did not leave any contact for
this
 accident. I already contacted
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my
car
 insurance company to repair the cracked parts, and the company will request you to send personal details, identifications, and
signature
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 on documents. Please follow the steps they will require. If you have any questions, feel free to contact
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me. Yours sincerely, Injun Lee
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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