Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, mobile phones have become necessary things in our life. Not only for grown-ups but

also

for

kids

too. They usually spend time with

this

device for a long time every day. As a matter of fact, we can not deny that smartphones play an important role in our

children

's daily life. It can entertain our

children

after a long day of studying;

moreover

, it contains a lot of various content

such

as movies, games, chats, and social media to name but a few. They can completely spend a day on their phone without running off stuff to do. The parents can

also

change the settings about the content age,

as a consequence

the

kids

will still be on their watch, and they do not have to worry about their

children

learning inappropriate things;

however

, they still have to teach what is wrong and right so their

kids

will really understand the reason.

In addition

, some people

also

say that mobile phones can

also

improve our

kids

' knowledge. For young

children

, there are plenty of games and media that

also

provide basic information that can teach them

while

they are

also

entertained.

Furthermore

, Teenagers usually use a lot of applications to work and study. The world is moving forward and we have to adjust our lifestyle to go

along with

it. It is not enough anymore to learn only in school or university classes,

due to

the phones’ size, it is easy for us to carry them everywhere,

as a

result

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adolescents are able to learn and work anywhere and anytime. To illustrate

this

, based on my own experience, it is normal for me to work and study

while

I am outside my house because if I do that, I will have more time to rest or do other homework without being stressed. In conclusion, smartphones not only benefit our

kids

in the entertainment aspect but

also

develop their knowledge. In my point of view,

this

improves us in many positive ways.