The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The provided table represents how many people visited ASHDOWN Museum in the
year
prior and in the year
following refurbishment
, while
the pie charts illustrate responses about tourist satisfaction during the same two years.
Overall
, what stands out from the table and pie chart is that both satisfaction and the number of visitors increased following the refurbishment
, although
the survey contribution of 'No response' remained unchanged in both years.
Looking at the table, it can be clearly seen that the number of people visiting the museum was 74000 in the year
before it was refurbished, and in the year
after refurbishment
Add a comma
,refurbishment
this
number surged to 92000.
Regarding the pie graph, tourists responding to 'Dissatisfaction' decreased dramatically from 40% to 15% following the refurbishment
, whereas
the proportions of the people who were 'Very satisfied' and 'Satisfied' escalated in the year
of refurbishment
, to 40% and 35%, respectively. The visitors who rated 'Very dissatisfied' before refurbishment
was, 10%, which fell to 5% in the year
when the museum got refurbished, which is similar to the percentage of responses in 'No response'. This
figure was the same during the two years.Submitted by yalidamanapp on
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