Bar graph shows 7 genres in the US
The bar graph illustrates that popular movie genres in 7 sections
which
encourage people to come to cinemas in Correct pronoun usage
apply
three
individual years
(1995, 2001,2005)
Overall
, the profits in part of Drama and Comedy were mainstream in three
different years
. In the contrast, the money that came from Thriller, Musicals, Animation
were low.
Looking at the graph more closely, in 1995, the benefits from Drama was the famous genre at that time and it is almost about 28%. Correct word choice
and Animation
In addition
, both years
in 2000
and 2005, the most famous genre was Comedy. Correct pronoun usage
both 2000
In other words
, similar
trend was seen in Add an article
a similar
early
2000s. Change the article
the early
Otherwise
, in the section of Thriller
, Musicals and Animation were not famous to people in Fix the agreement mistake
Thrillers
three
individual years
. And these three
sections in the bar graph were similar rate
, which is under 10%.Fix the agreement mistake
rates
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