Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear John,
I hope you are doing great. I hear the news about your plans and I know you are planning to visit me. I am very excited about it and
in addition
, it would be a pleasure to plan your trip.
I truly believe January or February are the best times because it is summer here in Australia, the weather is great, additionly are plenty of outdoor sports activities. In my opinion, you should stay in one of the cabins near Byron Beach, this
is the best spot for surfers and diving enthusiasts. I think the best solution will be if you come to my place for about two weeks because I would like to make a little trip and show you the Blue Mountains and of course Sydney too. Do not be afraid of big cities there are a lot of types of activities, everyone will find something interesting moreover
, you will see the world-famous Sydney opera! I am really happy about your visit and I looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishesSubmitted by dariusz.slusar on
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grammar
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structure
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style
Try using more varied sentence structures to make the letter more engaging and improve the flow.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend.
task achievement
All points from the prompt have been addressed effectively, providing a complete response.
structure
The greeting and closing are appropriate and add a personal touch to the letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.