Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits to living in cities. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Lots of individuals believe that living in the countryside has more health advantages than living in
cities
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. The majority of individuals will agree that in the agrarian site earlike there was no
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pollution
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Air
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was pure and there is no noise or environmental
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people
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are fit and healthy as compared to counterparts living in
cities
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. More
people
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will have
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healthy
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lifestyle
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and healthy immunity in the country sites as compared to
people
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living in urban areas. In India, To cite an example rural peoples always have more longevity and a healthy
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because of exposure to clean
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, unadulterated food etc.
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,
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living in
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are facing health issues because of numerous issues like
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be it
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, environment or noise. ,
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most of the city population is
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having problems with a sedentary
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which result in an unhealthy
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. To illustrate, In Canada,
people
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have more access to clean
air
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and an active
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which makes their population even in urban areas healthy and fit. More and more population in countries like Canada like to stay in the countryside
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of
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because of the benefits it offers.,
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after corona pandemic, a large section of society is preferring to stay in the terrain as it offers a better healthy
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, I am of opinion that , Most individuals are exposed to the healthy benefits of staying in a country site.
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,
people
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are aware of healthy lifestyles and benefits which can be derived from staying in the surroundings. Problems like
pollution
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, sedentary
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and adulterated food are not present in the country's site
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