You have recently been on a vacation in a foreign country and stayed at a home-stay, you have realised that you have misplaced an expensive wristwatch and cannot find it. Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you.

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Dear Aena, It's been a great visit to Alberta and staying at your home was the best decision I have made. Those 10 days were indeed wonderful. Hope you remember me, I stayed at your place for around 5 days and I'm from the same place your family belongs to which is Chicago. Sorry for the inconvenience, I forgot my wristwatch and requesting you to send me via

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taking shower, I put the

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on a dressing table and I just misplaced it during the packing. I remember I had not packed it with my luggage. It was a Black

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with Rose Gold outlines, Metal-framed, round-shaped and kinda formal from the Fossil. The

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was given by my late father,

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it is very special to my heart. It's my humble request that, if you found it please

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the

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to 1889, University Ave West, Windsor, ON N9A5H5. I'll send you a

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charge via online transfer, so don't bother about the

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expense at all. Hopefully, I'll get back the

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with your help. Thank you so much in advance for your help and have a wonderful day. Warm Regards, Dhara

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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