Children can learn effectively by watching television. therefore, they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, There is a lively debate that what is the effective way of learning for
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the invention of ,technology efficient way of schooling is the
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not an appropriate technique.I disagree with the given statement, I shall discuss my point of view in the ahead paragraphs. On the one hand, we can say that there are a plethora of ways of teaching.
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technology and urban standards of people, they are giving attention to programming media.
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impact is dreadful for pupils.
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have eye issues with watching a
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, In these days seven to eight years kids have low eyesight as compared to decades before. The only reason is they have lots of
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time
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. They have
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in schools
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at home.
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can be parents do have not enough
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for their kids.
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, they are just thinking about their comfort
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of their
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's well-being future. On the second hand,In the modern era schools have now these types of standards, where Tv is a must. We can see that in kindergartens offspring are learning from tv ,not from their books. Because teachers believe that's an appropriate way of teaching, Anyhow
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have disordered naturally but now we are rooting it by the screens.we can say that parents and teachers both are responsible for
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is helpful at some point. In spite of
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.School should change their standards regarding tv and parents must have enough
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for their loving
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • passive
  • sedentary
  • limit
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • educational content
  • expose
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
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