You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: To Whom it May Concern,

To Whom it May Concern, On

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occasion, I am writing to you regarding an inquiry about some properties. My name is Gonzalo Fuentes.I work for Apple as an engineer and a new factory is opening in Madrid next year so My company will be relocating me to Spain next year. My miss and I are interested to buy an apartment in Madrid. Will be great if it has two bedrooms and at least one of them in a suit, and

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a spacious kitchen because we love to cook and we spend a lot of time there, so it must be really modern. Another important thing is the location, we don't drive so the property needs to be close to public transport. I was doing a bit of searching and I found out that the suburb of Quevedo is quite interesting, with an amazing social life, bars and coffee shop. So that area will suit us perfectly. Look forward to hearing back from you. Faithfully, Gonzalo Fuentes

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

168 words

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The Greeting

Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisement ? what measure can be taken to protect them.

Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

More and more people nowadays visit well-known places to take photographs of themselves, without looking at the place. Why do you think this is happening? Is it a positive or a negative Trend?

Some people think national new is more important than international news, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?