Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The world is becoming smaller with the gift of
internet
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. One
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aspect of it is social networking sites which
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mushroomed among all of you.
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it is believed that
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social networking sites
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been a boon and bane to all
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individuals and
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society
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, I disagree
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the statement that social networking
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a tremendous amount of negative impact on both individual and
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, social networking sites like Instagram, Facebook etc have come across as
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aid for developing
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business
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businesses
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.
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can be testified by local artists who
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their business through their Facebook and Instagram pages and adds to the
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economy.
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, we have seen the magic of hashtags in marketing and promotions.
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,#vocalforlocal has been used to promote national artists. These hashtags
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to classify and categorize products and services which can be
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picked by the consumers.
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, these platforms create
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for people to share their achievement and stories which can make a difference
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the
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society
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and
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motivates other people. To illustrate, pages like
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of Human Bombay
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people who
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as
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inspiration by sharing their talents
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or their journey in life.
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inspires others to adopt new thinking in life and
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, it adds value to the entire humanity. Taking everything into consideration,
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I agree that social media can be harmful if not used
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the right intention
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, it can definitely help you to learn many new things and can be utilized for the best purpose for
upliftment
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the upliftment
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of
individual
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individuals
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and
society
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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