Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world is becoming smaller with the gift of

internet

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. One

such

aspect of it is social networking sites which

has

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mushroomed among all of you.

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it is believed that

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social networking sites

has

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been a boon and bane to all

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individuals and

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society

.

However

, I disagree

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the statement that social networking

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a tremendous amount of negative impact on both individual and

society

.

Firstly

, social networking sites like Instagram, Facebook etc have come across as

a

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aid for developing

small scale

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business

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businesses

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.

This

can be testified by local artists who

promotes

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their business through their Facebook and Instagram pages and adds to the

nations’

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economy.

Additionally

, we have seen the magic of hashtags in marketing and promotions.

For example

,#vocalforlocal has been used to promote national artists. These hashtags

helps

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to classify and categorize products and services which can be

further

picked by the consumers.

Secondly

, these platforms create

a opportunities

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opportunities

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for people to share their achievement and stories which can make a difference

to

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the

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society

and

also

motivates other people. To illustrate, pages like

official

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of Human Bombay

features

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people who

acts

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as

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inspiration by sharing their talents

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or their journey in life.

This

inspires others to adopt new thinking in life and

thus

, it adds value to the entire humanity. Taking everything into consideration,

while

I agree that social media can be harmful if not used

for

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the right intention

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, it can definitely help you to learn many new things and can be utilized for the best purpose for

upliftment

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the upliftment

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of

individual

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individuals

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and

society

.