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Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only made by those with special abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the fact that who can make artistic products. Some
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 hold a strong view that
art
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 does not limit creators
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 the opposites claim it can be only made by
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 with gifted talents.
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 each has its own perks, I consider myself
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an advocate of the former statement. Without a shadow of a doubt, aesthetic creations can be designed by whoever and not
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 to one particular group. It is obvious to note that
art
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 is a way to illustrate individual vision
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 the world so that everyone can do creative
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, nowadays, there
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 a myriad of artistry applications that help
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 in creating a masterpiece without requiring any special abilities. To be specific, AI aesthetic
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 filter on Tiktok can be cited as an outstanding example
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People
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 only have to type whatever they want to design
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artificial intelligence will assist them to generate the
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 of their choice.
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, there are myriad assistants that help everyone make
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On the other hand
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, it is undeniable that masterpieces can be only created by
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 with
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 talent for
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. It is apparent that those
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 are gifted with
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 abilities which act as a precursor for them to express
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 idea in
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. Unlike others, they can easily design or invent painting, music or poetry with little effort and the
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 is delicate by hand demonstrating their own vibes which
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 high
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in
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 critics. Beethoven is a noticeable instance
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 because he was a globally well-known deaf composer who had
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 first performance at seven years old and father
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 a wealth of spectacular songs.
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, artistic masterpieces can sometimes only be done by talented
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To sum up
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,
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 is a kind of amusement so it is open for everyone to express their creativity.
However
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, it is
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 a method for creators to demonstrate their vibes which merely those with special abilities can do.

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