You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you. write a letter to invite your friend to concert you are planning to go. In your letter say what the contant of music concert is where and when the music concert is why do you think your friend should go to concert

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Dear Tricia, Hope you are doing well! I am writing

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letter to invite you

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the music

concert

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of Arijit Singh which is going to be held in our town on 12th April

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2025 in

Sports

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the Sports

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complex downtown. As

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remember, you have been waiting for Arijit

Singh

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concert

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since

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year, as you were not able to make it at the

last

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moment.

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this

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time, his

concert

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will be more fun as it includes

light

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show with music. The area will be bigger and we will have more space to dance

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loud music. Tickets include

beverage

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as well. Our old school friends are

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coming to attend

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concert

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they have already purchased their tickets so it will be a great chance to meet all of them. I am excited to attend

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concert

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a concert

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with you. Please let me know if you want to join

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will book your tickets well in advance. I will wait for your call. Warm Wishes Ashima Gulati

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Consider adding a brief introduction about the singer or the music style to enhance your letter's appeal.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure you use correct capitalization, such as 'I' instead of 'i', to maintain professionalism in your writing.

coherence and cohesion

You wrote a warm greeting and closing, which makes the letter feel friendly and inviting.

task achievement

You successfully included essential details about the concert, including date, location, and reasons for attending, demonstrating a strong task response.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

166 words

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