You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people are of the view that industries and multinational companies, and not the government, should pay for the cost of ways to clean up the pollution they have created. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Thanks to the industrial revolution, many people are employed but natural resources
such
as wind and water are highly polluted in the past decade. In the wake of
such
a scenario, some naturalists profess that the industries that pollute are supposed to carry the expenses of their cleaning
instead
of the
government
paying for them. I strongly agree with
this
opinion and
this
essay will discuss the reasons elaborately.
Firstly
, multinational companies are running successfully and gaining profits but that does not mean that they can succeed at the cost of natural well-being. Industrialists who support these companies often argue that these organisations are providing employment opportunities and paying enormous taxes to the
government
therefore
there is no direct requirement to pay for clearing the pollution.
However
, I strongly disagree with
this
notion because
that
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they are paying taxes for their revenue and not for the natural problems they generate.
For example
, some textile industries in the town of Tirupur in Tamil Nadu have turned the once-beautiful Noyyal river into
the
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a
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toxic sewer by contaminating their drainage from dyeing and bleaching unit.
Aftermath
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The aftermath
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of
this
incident, the authorities could not able to clean the polluted water just because of the lack of funds.
Hence
it proves that
government
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sometimes not having enough financial supply to clear the effects of pollution.
Secondly
, other than pollution, many problems
such
as
umemployment
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unemployment
, and homelessness
are
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need to be addressed by the
government
. Alleviating a lot of impoverished
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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