You recently spent a weekend with your friend in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. Explain what you like about his new house. Tell what you enjoyed most during your staying. Suggest when and where you meet next time with him/her.

Dear John, How're you? I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and spirits. I'm writing

this

letter to inform you that I'm very impressed with your apartment because it is decorated with modern equipment. Here I would like to express my thoughts to you.

Firstly

, I tell, you about your flat is well furnished and looks very stunning.

Along with

this

, it's decorated by superior colour combinations, statues

as well as

sceneries which enhance the beauty of the place. Speaking of

this

, during my stay, I enjoyed when working in the kitchen.

Besides

this

, I liked the kitchen modern equipment which helps to work very easily because it works automatically. All in all, I will meet you on your special day

that is

coming soon. It's a good chance for us to spend quality time together. In the end, we would celebrate your birthday in a green place restaurant on 25 April which is well famous in your area. I hope you meet you soon. With regards, Eva.

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8 paragraphs

170 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently spent a weekend with your friend in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. Explain what you like about his new house. Tell what you enjoyed most during your staying. Suggest when and where you meet next time with him/her.

in some countries, owning a house rather than renting one is very improtant fro people. why might this be the case? do you think this is positive or negative situation?

It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Many Teenagers now have their own smartphone. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion

Some people think media should be allowed to publicize information on someone’s private life. Some others believe that media should be regulated in this regard. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and relevant examples.