The qualities a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#qualities #person #university #institution

Many people nowadays argued that it is not compulsory to study at universities in order to become a successful person.

Also

, public opinion suggested that you will not acquire all useful skills in academic

institutions

However

, I do not agree with

this

statement and I do not disagree with it. So ,

this

essay will examine

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thought-provoking issue.

To begin

with , today’s education system is outdated. From the beginning of education

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nothing is changed. Meanwhile, progress does not stand still.

In other words

, a lot of knowledge which

students

get at universities they are not appropriate nowadays.

Furthermore

, there are subjects that are not crucial , but teachers force study them.

As a result

students

acquire knowledge which

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useless in real life.

In addition

, statistics show that around 75

percent

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of people do not work in

theire

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their

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speciality. That means in many cases university diploma will not help apply for a job.

On the other hand

, educational

institutions

they still important.

Firstly

, universities provide lessons that help enhance logical and critical thinking. Lessons

such

as maths , physics or chemistry.

Secondly

, all academies and colleges teach you discipline.

For instance

, teachers give

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deadline

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to do

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home work

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and you must submit the

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before

this

time. As well, all educational

institutions

provide basic knowledge in order to make

students

more intelligent. In conclusion, educational

institutions

are vitally important. Meanwhile, there are a lot of drawbacks.

However

, if an academic system is accustomed to

this

day and age.

This

will help

students

become successful.

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