Nowadays, robots do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages
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the phenomenon
replaced
human jobs in the future. Change the verb form
replace
From
my opinion, Change the preposition
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robots
increase productivity in daily works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
However
, this
technology create
a potential job loss Change the verb form
creates
to
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for
the
society in the long run. Correct article usage
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This
essay will further
elaborate on both benefits and drawbacks of this
issue and thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.
In regard to the benefit of robots
creation, Change the noun form
robot
it
improves productivity and Add a missing verb
is it
treat
misbehaviour in workplaces. Change the verb form
treats
Robots
automation can do repeated tasks since they Change the noun form
Robot
are design
to do Change the verb form
are designed
works
without getting tired or taking Fix the agreement mistake
work
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a break
break
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Moreover
, when using robots
, the chance of illegal activities such
as fraud, data or personal's information breach occur can be avoided. For example
, study
has shown that the percentage of human errors and unethical behaviours in business places decline after the implementation of Add an article
a study
the study
robots
in organisations. Thus
, this
innovation saves labour cost
and time.
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costs
On the other hand
, this
development also
contribute
to some negative impacts. Since Change the verb form
contributes
the
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robots
had replace people's works
, the staffs are no longer needed in the company. Fix the agreement mistake
work
For instance
, in Japan, the unemployment rate has increase
significantly Change the verb form
increased
due to
many of society being kick
by their manager Wrong verb form
kicked
due to
robotic innovation. Therefore
, more and more people become jobless in the future.
In the nutshell, there are many pros and cons of these machines. Robots
are very convenient and create an efficient
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efficient works
an efficient work
works
. Unfortunately, the increasing number of robots
in the
industries might Correct article usage
apply
effect
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affect
community's
existing jobs. Correct article usage
the community's
Thus
, the authorities should look at the consequences of this
development before making it happen.Submitted by adilah070720 on
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