Nowadays, robots do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages

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era of technology,
robot's
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development become
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that might
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human jobs in the future.
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my opinion,
robots
increase productivity in daily
works
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.
However
,
this
technology
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a potential job loss
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society in the long run.
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issue and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion. In regard to the benefit of
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creation,
it
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improves productivity and
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misbehaviour in workplaces.
Robots
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automation can do repeated tasks since they
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to do
works
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without getting tired or taking
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.
Moreover
, when using
robots
, the chance of illegal activities
such
as fraud, data or personal's information breach occur can be avoided.
For example
,
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has shown that the percentage of human errors and unethical behaviours in business places decline after the implementation of
robots
in organisations.
Thus
,
this
innovation saves labour
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and time.
On the other hand
,
this
development
also
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to some negative impacts. Since
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robots
had replace people's
works
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, the staffs are no longer needed in the company.
For instance
, in Japan, the unemployment rate has
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significantly
due to
many of society being
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by their manager
due to
robotic innovation.
Therefore
, more and more people become jobless in the future. In the nutshell, there are many pros and cons of these machines.
Robots
are very convenient and create
an efficient
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efficient works
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works
. Unfortunately, the increasing number of
robots
in
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industries might
effect
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community's
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the community's
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existing jobs.
Thus
, the authorities should look at the consequences of
this
development before making it happen.
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