The Table Below Shows the Numbers of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below illustrates how many tourists have visited Ashdown Museum before and after it was refurbished. The pie chart shows the extent of satisfaction
of
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with
visitors
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visitors'
visitor's
travel
experience during the two periods.
The Change the verb form
travels
number
of visitors Use synonyms
have
obviously Change the verb form
has
rose
up, before refurbishment, there were only 74,000 people visited Ashdown Museum. Change the verb form
risen
However
, after Linking Words
refurbished
, there were 92,000 people visited Replace the word
refurbishment
this
tour site.
From the pie chart, we can see the proportion of “Very satisfied” and “Dissatisfied” Linking Words
have
obviously changed. The proportion of “Very satisfied” has Change the verb form
has
change
from 15% to 35%. The part of “Dissatisfied” has changed from 40% to 15%. The Change the verb form
changed
number
of “Very dissatisfied” and ”Satisfied”Use synonyms
have
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has
a
slightly different as well. The Correct article usage
apply
number
of “Very dissatisfied” has dropped from 10% to 5%. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of ”Satisfied” has rose from 30% to 40%. The Use synonyms
number
of “No respond” remains Use synonyms
on
5%, there is no Change preposition
at
different
before or after the refurbishment.Replace the word
difference
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