Informal essay: You have a friend who lives in a city abroad . You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city . Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him or her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the last few years . Ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

Dear Andrew, Hope you're doing well. I am so excited to let you know that I am planning to pursue my studies in your city soon . Now , I need a favour for getting some information about some best educational institutions in your area. As you already knew that we had together finished our bachelor's in physiotherapy stream . I have been a physiotherapist doctor in a local hospital for two years . I
also
want to do a post-graduate degree from a well-known overseas institution. As you are living in Melbourne City of Australia and there are ample career opportunities for physiotherapists in
this
city . Can you please collect some information about colleges in your area that offers a master's degree program in a medical stream ? See you soon . Warm regards to my uncle and aunt .I am waiting for your reply soon . Yours lovingly , Rahul.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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