In countries that have already achieved affluence, any additional wealth would not make people happier. Do you agree or disagree?
In
this
high-developed world, most sectors of society have enough money to maintain their basic daily life and do extra consumption as well. Linking Words
In addition
, some argue that additional wealth cannot bring happier for Linking Words
people
. Use synonyms
However
, I have some different opinions.
Nowadays, almost every individual has a skill or job and can earn the income to cover daily life as long as pay the effort. As the result, Linking Words
people
start pursuing higher goals that can make them happier. Based on the needs theory, when Use synonyms
people
satisfy their survival conditions the needs related to mental health will come up. More and more Use synonyms
people
seek Use synonyms
of
healthier mental Change preposition
apply
such
as work-life balance, job achievement, and a better lifestyle. Some Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
also
have a strong craving for love, they want to find someone who can live together for the rest of life.
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However
, from another angle, we are living in a high-cost society in general and individuals could spend more compared to the past. We got a number of burdens on our shoulders, Linking Words
for example
, the stress of buying a house, raising children, and Linking Words
also
having to face unlimited urges from ourselves. Those reasons force us to Linking Words
chasing
the better financial condition that we might have to work for a long time or attempt to get a greater salary or job position.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that we already earn enough affluence that feeling extra happiness Change the verb form
chase
become
more and more difficult. But in some way, humans have unlimited urges that can be satisfied by money.Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite