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You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you are selling - describe the furniture - suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture Write at least 150 words.

#furniture #friend #date
dear Daniel
i
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 do know you are going to move
in
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into
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 your flat next cup
of
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apply
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the week
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week
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weeks
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, starting your academic in Melbourne congratulation.
i
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 want to let you know
i
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 am going to
selling
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sell
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 some of my furniture
,
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 because
i
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 will move
in
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into
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 my new house next month, which is
14
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on 14
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 of Apr.
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 hope
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 can help you set up
apartment
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an apartment
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.
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 have a square book cabinet, the size looks like 40-inch tv.
also
, there are two bedside tables with drawers. if you need a bed,
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 do have a queen size bed with
mattress
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a mattress
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.
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 just bought them
last
 year which is in November. they are brand new. the most important thing is that they are black, which is
colour
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the colour
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 you like.
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 don’t want
talk
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to talk
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 about
price
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the price
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, but if it is for free, you will not take it. 150
dollars
 in total is my offer
,
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 if you want to buy separately. 20
dollars
 of
cabinet
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the cabinet
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. 40
dollars
 of bedside. the bed with
mattress
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the mattress
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 is 90
dollars
. let me know if you want to buy them.
welcome
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Welcome
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 to Australia. your
bast
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best
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 friend peter lee
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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