Some health problems are directly linked to people's life choices. Why do people make these choices? What can be done to encourage them to make healthier choices instead?
In
this
era of technology, health issues such
as heart diseases
, diabetes and more are become a phenomenon Fix the agreement mistake
disease
due to
people
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people's
choices
. From my personal point of view, communities today are to
busy with their own careers and Replace the word
too
then
prefer to eat fastfood
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fast food
instead
. This
essay will elaborate the
reasons why Change preposition
on the
people
make these options and the best solutions to motivate society in pursuing a healthy life.
In regard to the causes of this
problem, most of
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apply
people
nowadays are busy pursuing their job achievements. Since they are too busy with their daily tasks or goals, they don't have much time to prepare proper meals and Add an article
the people
thus
tend to ignore on
what type of ingredients Change preposition
apply
that
they are consumed. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For example
, a
research has shown that the number of Remove the article
apply
fast food
restaurants in Malaysia had increased in the past decades Add a hyphen
fast-food
due to
its
quick services Correct pronoun usage
their
where
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which
it
prevents Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
customers from waiting too long. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
, there is no wonder why these types of businesses becoming the best choices
among
society.
Seeing the problem with a brighter mind, many solutions can be helpful to encourage Change preposition
in
people
in making healthy choices
. One of the ideal solution
is Change to a plural noun
solutions
by
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to
establish
a campaign regarding the impact of fast food industries on our physical health. Other than that, the media play an important role in reducing the amount of Change the verb form
establishing
advertisement
of Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
these kind
of businesses from Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
influence
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influencing
people
's behaviours or choices
. For instance
, the authorities can control the media from infuencing
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influencing
people
's mind
and Fix the agreement mistake
minds
thighten
up the laws and regulations upon responsible parties. Correct your spelling
tighten
Therefore
, this
affort
might reduce the percentage of patients Correct your spelling
effort
suffer
from dangerous diseases in Change the form of the verb
suffering
the
society as a whole.
In the nutshell, health problems are serious issues because Correct article usage
apply
it
cause harmful effects on humans. The best approaches to deal with it are to educate Correct pronoun usage
they
citizen
about its damaging effects and Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
also
for the government to control the media from spreading unwanted information in relation to unhealthy
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an unhealthy
lifestyle
.Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
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