Some health problems are directly linked to people's life choices. Why do people make these choices? What can be done to encourage them to make healthier choices instead?

In

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era of technology, health issues

such

as heart

diseases

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, diabetes and more are become a phenomenon

due to

people

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choices

. From my personal point of view, communities today are

to

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busy with their own careers and

then

prefer to eat

fastfood

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fast food

instead

.

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reasons why

people

make these options and the best solutions to motivate society in pursuing a healthy life. In regard to the causes of

this

problem, most

of

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people

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nowadays are busy pursuing their job achievements. Since they are too busy with their daily tasks or goals, they don't have much time to prepare proper meals and

thus

tend to ignore

on

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what type of ingredients

that

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they are consumed.

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,

a

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research has shown that the number of

fast food

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restaurants in Malaysia had increased in the past decades

due to

its

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quick services

where

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it

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prevents

the

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customers from waiting too long.

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, there is no wonder why these types of businesses becoming the best

choices

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society. Seeing the problem with a brighter mind, many solutions can be helpful to encourage

people

in making healthy

choices

. One of the ideal

solution

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is

by

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establish

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a campaign regarding the impact of fast food industries on our physical health. Other than that, the media play an important role in reducing the amount of

advertisement

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of

these kind

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of businesses from

influence

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influencing

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people

's behaviours or

choices

.

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, the authorities can control the media from

infuencing

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influencing

people

's

mind

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and

thighten

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tighten

up the laws and regulations upon responsible parties.

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,

this

affort

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effort

might reduce the percentage of patients

suffer

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from dangerous diseases in

the

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society as a whole. In the nutshell, health problems are serious issues because

it

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they

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cause harmful effects on humans. The best approaches to deal with it are to educate

citizen

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citizens

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about its damaging effects and

also

for the government to control the media from spreading unwanted information in relation to

unhealthy

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an unhealthy

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lifestyle

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lifestyles

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.