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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

#people #music #cultures #ages
It is considered that
music
 represents
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various
culture
 with no
age
 limits. I completely agree with
this
 opinion and think that
music
 has no barriers to
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 the different
culture
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cultures
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as well as
age
limit
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.
Firstly
, I believe that most of the
music
 brings the cultural value of
people
, and it represents the background of
nations
.
Therefore
, all
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nations
 have their own
music
 desires.
For instance
, western countries have pop and rap
music
, and it is
identification
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 of their own desires.
Also
, most of the
Indians
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 song has their own
identification
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identity
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 and Sri Lankans obsess with their
music
cultures
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culture
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.
Therefore
, most of the Indian songs have
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to
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 the Sinhala version.
This
 is the evidence to say, there is no boundary between the
culture
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 changes in
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music
.
Moreover
,
music
 depends on the taste of
people
, and it is not created for
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one
age
 group. Because most of the
music
 creates for the feel.
However
, from our
birth
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 every
people
 listen to
music
 based on their situation whether it is sad or happy.
Music
 can heal the mind of
people
. As an example, all generations still listen to the
music
 of well-known singer Michelle Jackson even after his death.
Therefore
,
music
 cannot divide
on
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the
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age
. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
music
 can connect the whole world together
as well as
 it is the best way to bring the value of
culture
.
Therefore
,
people
 should carry out the values to highlight their
nations
 among
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other
nations
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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